One Frozen Second Poem by Nicoletta Mura

One Frozen Second

Rating: 5.0


Breathing your breath,
dreaming your dream,
skin on skin, warm and
so sparkling with hope.

Fingers entwined
and eyes enchanted,
flakes of sun on
spilled happiness.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
K. Jared Hosein 18 March 2006

An excellent and wonderful take on a moment, so full of splendour, so beautiful, so personal that it moves in slow-motion until it halts in this picturesque portrait you have displayed in this piece. A sweet read. - K.

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Jerry Hughes 11 October 2005

just lovely, Nicoletta

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