One Last Breath Poem by Kyrsten Gaddis

One Last Breath

Rating: 3.0


The snow that shines
Beneath the pines
Has a secret you wouldn't believe
It will enchant and delight you, But has a trick up it's sleeve
We play up in the snow all day
But trekking through takes your breath away
One little rest
Will be a test
Between life or death
But I won't let you take that one last breath

Saturday, May 16, 2009
Topic(s) of this poem: snow
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jessica Caswell 18 May 2009

its good but the end is the best 'i wont you take that last beath', good

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Corey Rebbechi 17 May 2009

i lyk it not to shabby

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Fearless D 17 May 2009

I like it, but I prefer poems that flow.

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