Lore Me34

Veteran Poet - 1,062 Points (March 10,1967 / Chicago, IL. USA)

One Last Breath 'An Als Poem' - Poem by Lore Me34

I used to take for granted the very air I breathe.
Now these days I am begging God for one last breath.
One last breath so that I may see my love ones face.
One last breath so I may smell spring flowers as they bloom.
One last breath so I may get a final taste of my favorite food.
One last breath so I may kiss my love goodbye.
I know with ALS I am asking for a lot when I ask for one last breath.

Topic(s) of this poem: hope

Form: Blues Poem


Poet's Notes about The Poem

This poem was inspired by a movie starring Hillary Swank as a person with ALS. You are not you. That I saw on Netflix.

Comments about One Last Breath 'An Als Poem' by Lore Me34

  • Kelly Kurt (3/26/2015 9:31:00 PM)


    An insidious disease. Your poems tells us all that we should be thankful for and enjoy the time we have. Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, March 26, 2015



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