One Little Wave Comments

Thank you for your taking time to read and for your comments as well !!

A good ode to nature. Thanks

see the land beyond the sea, meaningful

Leaving behind my worries, I thought I had set sail, But am still unhappy, even after leaving jail. These waters are my home now and forever they will be.. I will live here in the ocean as long as can be.. And the final verse: One little wave who wanted to see the land beyond the sea.. This is great imagination……. of the little wave.. so fine and made me think of your poetic abilities. tony