Friday, May 13, 2016
One Mans Hand Comments
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One Mans Hand
Soldier out there on your own, is it worth the thrill you seek
Lying cold beneath the moon, no persons there too speak
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3/14/2026 7:27:55 PM # 1.0.0
Now this is better than your first poem and very well written. I don't know if you're a serving soldier but it sounds very authentic to me. Just a small niggly point. In the second line too should be to. That doesn't stop me giving this a straight ten. You can write well. Tom Billsborough