Rituparna Choudhury

Rookie (9th September,1994 / Guwahati)

One Night....

Poem by Rituparna Choudhury

In the dark and chilly night, one day
There I stood by the window pane
Wondering about the silence that made me sad..
The owls hooting, the wolves howling
But still I could only feel the
Silence of that night..
The stream that flows by our house
Was still flowing pleasantly,
with a Gurgling sound...
As I looked up to the sky...
I saw the silver moon and
the twinkling stars...
There it was....the moon
Smiling at me a cute smile...
And the stars...showing their
Elegance and beauty
By shining in the vast sky..
The silence made me feel lonely but..
I realized soon after that
Why should I feel lonely? ..
I had my companions-
the stars, the moon, the owls
the wolves and...
the peaceful stream flowing...


Comments about One Night.... by Rituparna Choudhury

  • Bhaskar ...... (9/6/2009 11:47:00 AM)

    well.. a nice account of the mystified silence, night..! loved it..keep up the good work(Report)Reply

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  • Bhaskar ...... (9/6/2009 11:46:00 AM)

    well.. a nice account of the mystified silence, night..! loved it..keep up the good work(Report)Reply

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  • Saathi 4u (4/17/2008 10:11:00 PM)

    hi rituparna
    1) i read ur comment on my peom..its true..i hlove to c ur true and hearty feelings..i salute to them...thnx a lot..for feeling truth and expressing truth in a natural manner.
    2) this is abut ur new poem....the beauty of this poem is 'beauty of silence'its very heat touching...u hv a fresh mind with new thoughts in every sad or happy moments.
    3) aap agar onlin ho saktey ho to is id per plz...saathi_143@yahoo.com(Report)Reply

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  • Rani Turton (4/17/2008 6:21:00 AM)

    Night provokes emotions that day doesn't. Everybody feels lonely from time to time. The environment has been prettily evoked.(Report)Reply

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  • Deepti Agarwal (4/17/2008 5:35:00 AM)

    so nicely expressed...
    nobody will feel lonely after going thru yr work...(Report)Reply

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  • Iromidayo Omowole (4/17/2008 5:28:00 AM)

    beautiful lines. i like the poetry in ur lines(Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, April 17, 2008