One Night.... Poem by Rituparna Choudhury

One Night....

Rating: 4.5


In the dark and chilly night, one day
There I stood by the window pane
Wondering about the silence that made me sad..
The owls hooting, the wolves howling
But still I could only feel the
Silence of that night..
The stream that flows by our house
Was still flowing pleasantly,
with a Gurgling sound...
As I looked up to the sky...
I saw the silver moon and
the twinkling stars...
There it was....the moon
Smiling at me a cute smile...
And the stars...showing their
Elegance and beauty
By shining in the vast sky..
The silence made me feel lonely but..
I realized soon after that
Why should I feel lonely? ..
I had my companions-
the stars, the moon, the owls
the wolves and...
the peaceful stream flowing...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Iromidayo Omowole 17 April 2008

beautiful lines. i like the poetry in ur lines

0 0 Reply
Bhaskar ...... 06 September 2009

well.. a nice account of the mystified silence, night..! loved it..keep up the good work

0 0 Reply
Bhaskar ...... 06 September 2009

well.. a nice account of the mystified silence, night..! loved it..keep up the good work

0 0 Reply
Saathi 4u 17 April 2008

hi rituparna 1) i read ur comment on my peom..its true..i hlove to c ur true and hearty feelings..i salute to them...thnx a lot..for feeling truth and expressing truth in a natural manner. 2) this is abut ur new poem....the beauty of this poem is 'beauty of silence'its very heat touching...u hv a fresh mind with new thoughts in every sad or happy moments. 3) aap agar onlin ho saktey ho to is id per plz...saathi_143@yahoo.com

0 0 Reply
Rani Turton 17 April 2008

Night provokes emotions that day doesn't. Everybody feels lonely from time to time. The environment has been prettily evoked.

0 0 Reply
Deepti Agarwal 17 April 2008

so nicely expressed... nobody will feel lonely after going thru yr work...

0 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success