One Of My Many Struggles Poem by God is Good

One Of My Many Struggles

Rating: 5.0


Silent rain, silent tears...
stirring memories, freshend fears.
Sins refreshed, overbearing,
Me giving up, no longer caring.
Eyes drifting close, no longer awake.
I give whomever my soul to take.
.....(sigh)
Quick showers, quick sorrow.
I'll be over it by tommorow.
Till it all comes up again,
then once more, i'll fight to win.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shashendra Amalshan 20 June 2009

nice one indeed my lady! ! ! .....great flow to the words... very rhythmic...10 for this one with love shan

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*I'm not broken. * 17 June 2009

Wow, your an awesome writer for one so young. Good job, keep writing(:

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