Monday, February 9, 2015

One Of The Million Stars Comments

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Gazing at the twinkling stars above
Fascinating creature making me fall in love
Its brilliance which delighted my sight
Lifts me up and brought me into the height
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Lenie Pama
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Lenie Pama 12 April 2016

the poem tells about a symbolic love story which a lover failed at the end..

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Suburban Lovechild 10 February 2015

Very thought-provoking and great imagery. Even though that star is gone or hidden by the clouds, there are thousands more waiting to be admired. Please check out my poems, I'd appreciate it

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Suburban Lovechild 10 February 2015

Very thought-provoking and great imagery. Even though that star is gone or hidden by the clouds, there are thousands more waiting to be admired. Please check out my poems, I'd appreciate it

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Chinedu Dike 10 February 2015

A lovely poem, well articulated and nicely penned from the heart. Thanks for sharing and do keep it up. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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