Saturday, March 23, 2019

One Smile Is Not Enough Comments

Rating: 5.0

Just try
To be like any pretty daylight,
Try to be
Like a pretty flower,
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MOHAMMAD SKATI
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Bri Edwards 29 March 2019

i should probably try much harder than i do! ! but let's us not 'put on a false face' too often. to MyPoemList. nice. bri :)

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Kumarmani Mahakul 23 March 2019

Trying more and more and being like pretty daylight is a great aspect. This poem is very beautifully penned.10

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Mohammad Skati 24 March 2019

I appreciate every word in your pretty comment thanking you a lot, my dear poet.

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