Thursday, September 10, 2009

One Stop Shopping; A Nightmare Comments

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A man simply waiting outside for the right moment till the electronic door opens.
But it's a public holiday and he knows nothing about holidays
As he's nearly senile.
He holds a chit prescribed by a famous doctor who practices in a lunatic asylum.
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nimal dunuhinga
holiday sorry sugar tomorrow shopping
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Alison Cassidy 19 September 2009

Brilliant! Your wicked sense of the absurd makes your point poetically and profoundly. Love this one. Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Sandra Fowler 11 September 2009

Excellent satire. But also very sad. Kindly, Sandra

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kalubovila East, Sri Lanka
nimal dunuhinga
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kalubovila East, Sri Lanka
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