Sunday, April 18, 2010

One Weird Night Comments

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losen my mind n fly high sky, crash to earth wen the door bell rings,
the floor it self sings catch a sound wave with the corner of my eye,
the sooner i discice the lack of self lies, beneth the 4 laws of life,
all course the crak in the center of duble fether pilow sacks,
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Elude Most
fly
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Marie Bliss 02 June 2010

It doesn't matter about the spelling Miss Elude, the meaning is clear!

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Alice Schicklgruber 18 April 2010

watch your spelling. other than that, a pretty good poem.

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