Friday, May 8, 2009

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Dare i push down..?
Down deep into the skin, ,
The blood is dripping on the floor, ,
My leg is red and my heart is torn, ,
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Kaitlyn Breitkreutz
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Kesav Easwaran 17 May 2009

relax Kaitlyn...look out...don't you see a dawn breaking out? red and smiling...smiling at you? emotions overstretched...good write...good use of words all through...10

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