Monday, April 20, 2015

Onwards Comments

Rating: 4.5

This existence pulls me toward a void.
All alone in an empty open room;
Traversing space like a meteoroid,
Slowly embracing the impending doom.
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Franz Of Lion
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Chinedu Dike 20 April 2015

Beautiful train of thoughts, well articulated, nicely encapsulated and penned with conviction. A lovely romantic poem. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Kelly Kurt 20 April 2015

Wonderful poem, Erys. Thanks for sharing

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