Open Poem by katie aguirre

Open



you opened up to me
and i opened up to you
you opened the door and
told me to leave, you
opened the door and told
me that you loved me
you opened my heart
and i fell in love
with you.............
Then you opened the door
pointed, to my car,
and told me to leave
you opened the door and
broke me once more..

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Stellar write...Crisp, tightly cropt linage glides in structural movement like a shiny new coin tossed 'cross a freshly glaced icepond! Well Done ~FjR~

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