mohamed Alpha Ba

Rookie - 167 Points (31-10-1991 / sierra leone)

Oppression - Poem by mohamed Alpha Ba

Should i exculpate
These atheist stray dogs, before its late
That barked, resorting with all might
In Jehovah's premises with fury at night
Such ferocity and incivility against my trait

Should i deterred this fight
Acquaint them for we're one under HIS light
No matter if am black nor white
But stay in extreme punctilious neatness
Towards others' faith and tenacious saintliness

Should i seek vengeance
For the heavy expostulation on my country dress
O Guru! O Grandee! teach them more
For they who oppose are insane
They own nothing, not even airplane

These pretenders and sanctimonious leaders
Distorting the true message, from the messengers


Poet's Notes about The Poem

Trust me its not harsh. The poet who wrote that poem sent me a message once asking me to read one of his poems so I did and the poem was all about being horrible about my country, I asked him why he wanted me to read it and he then started saying bad things about my queen and then insulted my intelligence and my job and he the insulted my religion I am a very religious girl I respect other relgions and am a vert peaceful person and he started saying lies about my religion and he only wrote that poem to insult me and my religion. He insulted me in every way possible for no reason, he doesn't even know me

Comments about Oppression by mohamed Alpha Ba

  • Mohamed Alpha Ba (6/29/2014 11:51:00 AM)


    what shud i say your comment wz inspiring (Report) Reply

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  • Shania K. Younce (8/15/2012 6:56:00 PM)


    I will let you know I am a baptist. The poem is fine. I think whatever was insulted should have been deeply inquired and brought to see you can turn the other cheek. (Report) Reply

  • eloida Capuno (8/15/2012 11:07:00 AM)


    whatever one says about your religion, i believe the best to do is to forgive. i like your poem, you wrote well. keep it up. (Report) Reply

    Mohamed Alpha Ba Mohamed Alpha Ba (7/14/2014 5:21:00 PM)

    thank u eloida

  • Rachel Streek (8/9/2012 11:28:00 AM)


    Really great poem, and I notice you used the message I sent to you when you when you asked about a comment I left on a poem that was nasty to my religion. Thank you for writing this poem its very good and I hope that other poet reads it (Report) Reply

    Mohamed Alpha Ba Mohamed Alpha Ba (7/14/2014 5:22:00 PM)

    hmm

    Mohamed Alpha Ba Mohamed Alpha Ba (7/14/2014 5:22:00 PM)

    u welcom streek....................wat are frens for

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, August 7, 2012



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