Wednesday, April 25, 2007

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my heart is fading away
like the sun at 6pm
like a wilting flower
when cut at the stem
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Rajaram Ramachandran 25 April 2007

my heart is fading away like the sun at 6pm like a wilting flower when cut at the stem I like this simile very much-the setting sun and the wilting flower. A presentation of poetic excellence.

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