Our Love Song Poem by Enchanting Owl

Our Love Song

Rating: 5.0

Flumping here with forsakenness,
Telescoping my own consciousness.
With the radio playing our song,
A song of rumination has been playing all along.

Rubbernecking out of nowhere,
A choir of cicatrix filled the air.
Disorienting girdled me totally,
Because grand nostalgia reminded me of you, sadly.

Letting long sufferings retched me,
Like running shoeless with gloomy plea.
But I needed to be understood,
Because all my desolate life I was misunderstood.

Dying is glass; living is wine.
Put the piece back to make a design.
Found myself walking like a voodoo.
Deadening, decreasing, and turning off the radio.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
To add spice to the relationship, we tend to check our playlist for songs that suit our relationship. A song that summarizes and narrates your journey, a song that makes you emotional every time you listen to it.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
CJ DG 29 August 2023

wow, i loved this

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S December 29 August 2023

please make more of this

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S S 29 August 2023

what a powerful poem

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Acir Eryat 29 August 2023

You are a brilliant poem, rated this 5

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Julrick Verallo 29 August 2023

thank you for this Enchanting Owl

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M H 29 August 2023

This line is so perfect 'Dying is glass; living is wine.'

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