Our Night On The Beach Poem by Shelby Jasmin Estrada

Our Night On The Beach

Rating: 2.7


Waves crashing on the beach
Sand in my toes
Sun setting
Trees swaying
Throwing rounds rocks in the water
Lying in each others arms
Birds on a log
Crabs crawling along the waters edge
Our footprints through the sand
Scattered like the stars in the sky

Sunday, April 5, 2009
Topic(s) of this poem: beach,birds
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Deva De Silva 23 June 2009

This is amazingly descriptive... I saw you... I saw the crabs... the bird (what kind though?) and felt the moment of pure contentment! Beautiful Shelby... just the kind of writing I love to read. It merges your experience with the readers...

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