Sunday, April 5, 2009

Our Night On The Beach Comments

Rating: 2.7

Waves crashing on the beach
Sand in my toes
Sun setting
Trees swaying
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Shelby Jasmin Estrada
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Deva De Silva 23 June 2009

This is amazingly descriptive... I saw you... I saw the crabs... the bird (what kind though?) and felt the moment of pure contentment! Beautiful Shelby... just the kind of writing I love to read. It merges your experience with the readers...

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Shelby Jasmin Estrada

Shelby Jasmin Estrada

Friday Harbor, WA
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