Our Numbered Days. Comments

If we can reset to Zero it is a blessing, because it's a clear slate to begin from. Inner wishes for change are commendable.

last line: I'd use 'maybe', not 'may be', but I think in some countries 'may be' would be considered correct. In the U.S. I've learned to usually use 'maybe'.

I think I understand the last line, and I think it has to do with the death of something approaching. bri ;)

line 10: Use 'patched', not 'patch' line 13: I'm not sure what to suggest here, but the line's meaning is unclear to me.

suggestions: line 1: Use 'fell' or 'falls', not 'fall', maybe 'does fall' line 5: Use 'lying', not 'laying', though many many people would also use ''laying' and it IS confusing.

Oops! I'll try again. I suspect English is not your 'main language' and I have some suggestions. [ I think many native English speakers also learn English differently from what I learned! [.

I suspect

Sometimes 'making things right' and 'patching up things' is impossible to accomplish, or the thought of trying to do it is overwhelming and so 'things' don't get done.