Our Promises Poem by Prachi Agrawal

Our Promises



Standing on the border line
Of our hearts’ desires
We knew we’d never be together
We knew we’d never live forever.

But we promised to remember
Each other in prayers
To see us together in dreams
Playing near that old tall tree.

Now remembering that fun and gun
And the way we used to run
How to tell you I still miss you
I can just get a close review.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Harindhar Reddy 10 November 2011

Holy moly, Holy-dooly! Ideas ran so close in the poem and left a wonderful mark on my heart. I think poetess is in reminiscent mood remember as childhood friend/sweetheart. It's an amazing one. I love these lines which show promise from a promising poet! Happy journey as poet! :) :) :) 'We knew we’d never be together We knew we’d never live forever.'

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