Our Ring Poem by Mr. Jay

Our Ring

Rating: 5.0


-No need to buy it
-For I will make it myself
-It is only then will my love and passion
be expressed into soilid matter!
-For I will engrave our name and date
to be forever remembered.
-It was said the wisest gift was not of
its materialistic value, but the time
and love spent on the gift.[matter]

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Romeo Della Valle 08 January 2010

Brief, but powerful, heart touching poem...You spoke your heart out, loud and clear without any fear! Great job! Keep it up! (I wish I have the same luck as you, please, read my poem titled 'A LOST RING', Your poem is well penned, keep it up! 10+++

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