Outside Poem by Jade Just me

I'm on the inside looking out
I'm trapped inside this place
I want out I want out I want out
Because all I can see is your face

My hand is on the window
trying to break free
I see you walking out there
I knock, hoping you'll see me

then the window breaks
the glass has gone to shatter
down lies my limp body
all broken up and tattered

well, i got my wish
now i am outside
but to make it more specific
they're layin me down tonight

3Jade
please, feel free to tell me what you think of this poem.... no comments can hurt me.