Thursday, April 20, 2006

Outside My Window There Is A War Comments

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It is cold and dark outside:
there is a battle being fought
Between the wind
and the passive trees.
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R H 20 April 2006

I admire the imagery you have used here, the power and strength of the wind is vividly portrayed. An impressive write Vincent. Kind regards, Justine. (My observation was more friendly, entitled 'Invisible Friend'.)

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Sylvia Spencer 20 April 2006

Vincent is is such a great poem and very well written/ so much meaning and truth Brilliant cheers Sylvie

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