Saturday, August 17, 2013

Over And Over Comments

Rating: 5.0

Over and over I tried. And over and over you just lied. Over and over desperately, I would scream as I’d cry. I would wonder and wonder how and why. Could you over and over look me dead in the eye? And word after word tell me hurtful lie after lie.
Over and over I would try and I try. And over and over you continued to tell story after story, lie after lie. I gave you chance after chance and try after try. In return I got excuse after excuse, justifications of why.
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Ryann Blair
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Alexander Coppedge 17 August 2013

Held my interest throughout well done over and over great ingredience for a poem

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