My heart is broken
And I can't bear
With this pain
I wanna die
With this pain
My heart is bleeding
Inside I'm hurting
But outside
I'm cying and screaming
How could you put me through this pain?
Well, I promise you that it gets better. It is a good effort and good to start with shorter poems like these... think of images that can describe the feelings you have and weave them into your poems and you will see how practise makes perfect! ! ! Don't stop writing. Yuri*
This write is one 'raw' show of painful emotion, Thank you for sharing, Emi
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
I liked it, thanks for sharing with us! ! !