Sunday, December 28, 2008

Pain Comments

Rating: 5.0

Pain... running through me,
as if leaves covered with dew.
The thought of feeling that cannot be seen,
suppressed; not knowing what it will do;
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Jeremy Fallecker
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Fadwa Gmiden 22 January 2011

i love this poem so much keep in it

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Yaseen Anwer 20 August 2009

Its really Fantastic! very well constructed.

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Briana Johnston 28 December 2008

I love the way you use figurative language and the way you use words. Keep writing, please. Because this was simply amazing.

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Shyam Balaji 28 December 2008

REAL PAIN, amazing poem! ! >..the descriptions are really awesome...loved it a lot...wonderful expressions....gr8 imagery...has all the essense of a poem...keep going..GOOD LUCK! ! ! >. read ma poems nd comment on them wen ur free..bye..take care.

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Jeremy Fallecker

Jeremy Fallecker

Latrobe, Pennsylvania-USA
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