Pain... running through me,
as if leaves covered with dew.
The thought of feeling that cannot be seen,
suppressed; not knowing what it will do;
...
Read full text
I love the way you use figurative language and the way you use words. Keep writing, please. Because this was simply amazing.
REAL PAIN, amazing poem! ! >..the descriptions are really awesome...loved it a lot...wonderful expressions....gr8 imagery...has all the essense of a poem...keep going..GOOD LUCK! ! ! >. read ma poems nd comment on them wen ur free..bye..take care.
i love this poem so much keep in it