Pain Poem by jazzmen hankins

Pain

Rating: 5.0


Pain travels,
it hurts,
it seems like no one feels me,
or even hears me.

Well guess what,
I speak out loud now,
theres no more struggles with my heart,
I seem i'm searching in the dark.

I see and feel it everyday,
some poeple think this is a joke,
no way, stand up,
this is the real world,
and it gets harsh.

so keep your head-up,
and never give up,
stay standing up.

people don't think it's true,
but that game takes two,
your with me,
and i'm with you!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Eyan Desir 17 June 2009

Good flow on this poem I felt the poem was a bit twisted 10s

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Cristy Upshaw 17 June 2009

you seem to go between pain and love. I guess what is one without the other? I have felt this way many times, being an emotional person, I feel more than some do. excellent write.

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