Pain Poem by Deep Paul

Pain

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Life gifts us 'pain', a natural phenomenon
Which demands no language to understand
It comes as a bolt from the blue
And creeps in at the most improper time.

Anything on earth can torment, either physically or mentally.
Every tribulation, when surfaces for the first time
Seems to inflict the greatest pain,
Until a new one, more painful, emerge and smothers the previous!

What else is life?
Nothing! But a journey from distress at one point to another
And what lies in between, is the silverline that fuels the life's wheel.
We remain there thinking, "Here ends one bad time
and another one has not yet begun! "

Pain
Friday, May 18, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: pain
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Life is full of pains and gains. This is about the pains in our life's journey.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Beena Antony 19 May 2019

Life gifts us 'pain', a natural phenomenon Which demands no language to understand..so meaningful...an excellent poem.

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Deep Paul 03 June 2020

Thanks for comments

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Deep Paul 03 June 2020

Thanks for reading and comments!

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Dr Antony Theodore 20 May 2018

And what lies in between, is the silverline that fuels the life's wheel..words of wisdom...... yes we all go on this way. suffering and learning and smiling in between inspite of pain. thank u dear poet. tony

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Deep Paul 20 May 2018

Many thanks for the comments

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A very meaningful and poignant write about life. The first stanza is very moving. Yet, where there is pain there is also gain. Beautifully crafted write.10

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Deep Paul 20 May 2018

Thankyou for the comments

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Dr Antony Theodore 18 May 2018

Nothing! But a journey from distress at one point to another And what lies in between, is the silverline that fuels the life's wheel. sooo true dear poet. these are our living experiences.. thank u for expressing very clearly in simple words and to the point.. thank u very much for this poem. tony

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Deep Paul

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Kerala, South India
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