Pain Points Poem by Alexandra Motschmann

Pain Points

Rating: 4.5


Where are the pains
Let us find the cause
What does it obtains
The why and because
The roots we scrutinize
And when they appear
How they are disorganize
To switch into the next gear
The deeper you look
The more you contemplate
Likely as James Cook
The more you state
And even so there might be no correction
To this perfect inter-department connection
We still search for a ground breaking solution
And in the end find the proper conclusion

Monday, September 11, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: deep,observation,painful,seeing
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazib Kamalvi 12 September 2017

A nice poetic imagination, Alexandra. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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