Tuesday, November 17, 2009

Pain-Unhappines Comments

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Everday I felt out of place
Knowing that nobody cares about me
Hurts me real bad.
Everyday I'm always in pain
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Missy Meyer
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Ganesh Ayyer 17 November 2009

Dear Missy Meyer, I liked your Poem for two things - one because, you have managed to express your feelings into a nice poetry form two because, it is also a solution for your un-happiness (if you understand and catch the deeper hidden meanings) ! There are friends for you, so keep writing and be happy :)

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yellowbell alamanda 17 November 2009

oh, dear! we've all been hurt and have our own pain. com'on cheer up, never think that you're alone. But you wrote nice and its good to find a out let, its a good thing somehow you could used your emotion to something different. Keep writting. :)

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Simply Crazy 17 November 2009

i can feel the pain just by reading this. very nice write.

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Missy Meyer

Olympia Washington
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