Saturday, April 16, 2005

Painful Silence Comments

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Our love is not what it used to be
The hurt and pain is all we see
It is a shame to let it all end
But there is no way for us to pretend
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Walter Krijthe
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thats a beautiful poem hun

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Scarborough Gypsy 16 April 2005

Walter, I have to agree with you on this one too. It is definately worse when only silence is left. I liked your use of repetition. Thanks Gypsy

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Walter Krijthe

Walter Krijthe

Groningen, The Netherlands
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