Monday, October 9, 2017

Paint My World Black Comments

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It gets harder and harder,
not to feel the pain,
The scars,
I am at war with myself,
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chris schwartz
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Practicing Poetess 09 October 2017

Innocence, once lost, can never be restored. But neither do you have to simply stand by & let the darkness consume and destroy you. Don't let it win. God will make the ugly perpetrator with the black sharpie go away, because God is light and can overcome darkness and evil. You just keep covering over with bright pastels, and eventually Mr. Sharpie will move on to an easier victim.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 09 October 2017

Feeling pain continuously for long time is thought provoking. Pain makes a person harder is so sad. Through these seasons from dawn til dusk darkness whispers. But still we hope for love and light. Interestingly drafted poem is shared...10

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