Saturday, January 14, 2017

Paper Boat Comments

Rating: 4.0

In this stream of life, only thin layer to float.
Mercy of the stormy seas, without the coat.

Future uncertainty, surrounded by the doubt.
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Miika Kaltiainen
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Lantz Pierre 14 January 2017

This has a beautiful stillness of Oriental lyricism. A calm radiant heart surrounded by, supported by, in harmony with the world around it. I suspect some of this effect is produced a less than fluent translation from Finnish(?) , but it matters not. I fear some the freshness and innocence might be lost in a better translation. I like it very much.

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