Paradise Poem by May N

Paradise

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the gentle sounds of waves crashing against the shore
the soft crunching of sand under our feet
the smell of the salty ocean breeze
and the wondeful look in your eyes as the sun sets
it is truly my paradise

the warm feeling of being loved when you clasp your hands over mine
the soft texture of your skin caressing my own
the hot breath you deliver as you whisper sweet nothings into my ear
and the strength that you engulf me in as you embrace me
it is truly my paradise

my thoughts whirl around me
my heart swiftly beats
as i know you have captured it
holding it close to your own
you give your love and eternal devotion
it is truly my paradise

now hand in hand, we walk
our passions molding into one
and i cannot think of a better person
to share this moment with
ilove you with all my heart
for you now hold my mind, my body, and my heart
forever in your hands
it is truly my paradise

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Javier Falcon 19 July 2008

Beautiful, just like the girl I love...

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Thad Wilk 18 July 2008

A beautiful poem May! Delightful and capturing! Thank you for sharing! *10*! ! Best wishes Friend Thad

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May N

May N

Cagayan de Oro, Philippines
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