Paradise Poem by kelly kel

Paradise

Rating: 5.0


Looking across the endless vast
contemplating on the past
the water sways here and there
it is in this one moment I have no care

The possibilities are endless
I have no fear
There is no other place I wish to be
I am already here

The beauty seems to never end
even through the storm
dusk's cool breeze chills my skin
but my heart is still warm

The sunset shows there is still light
in the darkest time
There may not always be a reason
but always rhythm and rhyme

Back and forth
up and down
yet never precise
my own paradise

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
C.R. Clark 13 February 2009

A fine write, Kelly. It seems you have found your Shangri La. Beautiful. Richard

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~ Jon London ~ 11 February 2009

Ahhh to find such a place would be so perfect in this crazy place we call home. A Brilliant 10 Jon

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Balbino Crespo 11 February 2009

i like very much, wish i could find paradise and a women like you to complete the feeling of being in love...

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