Parallel 69 { A Pentad-Senryu }(Sensual Content) Poem by Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr

Parallel 69 { A Pentad-Senryu }(Sensual Content)



Won't you come with me
To Utopic Dimensions
Honeyed Dreams sublime?

Do you thirst like me,
For a taste of Rhapsody..?
Take me in....imbibe.

You are warm and sweet,
Like the first fresh vintage sip
Of the finest wine.

Let's climax the night
Let us close our eye's untill
I rise; you look fine.

Your morning eyes speak,
That last night be no dream;
Say, "Yes", that you're mine.

Breakfast in bed, Lov',
As together we will dine,
At parallel sixty-nine!

Friday, March 2, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: romanticism,senryu,sensual
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 02 March 2018

Revisiting your poem values more to witness your brilliance in expression. Climax of the night is full of love and light. You are very clever enough to express romanticism in this poem.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 02 March 2018

Your morning eyes speak, That last night be no dream; Say, Yes, that you're mine. Breakfast in bed, Lov', As together we will dine, At parallel sixty-nine! ..........romantic expression. Beautiful poem shared. Thanks for sharing.

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