The Light Of Deity... Poem by Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr

The Light Of Deity...

Rating: 4.8


Where were you when the Maple trees died?
Where were you when their leaves fell and dried?
Where were you when Nature's Mother's just sighed,
With a wink and smile to Autunns beguile.

Yes, I know, You were there, I believe, I'll attest
Even trees need a stretch of a long winters rest.
And, You knew all of this, before You dropped Your kiss-
O'er the clouds and the Sun, and so much more than this,
before the air, mornings dew, the breeze that cools its mist,
before you sent your only Son to carry out His sacrifice
that began a chain of Renaissance from Resurrections light.
You were there, You are here... Your presence always be
Because that's what God does....He's the Light of Diety.



FjR-MMXV

Saturday, September 19, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: god
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Susan Williams 21 February 2016

WoW. WoW. and WoW. Not very literary of me to say but so descriptive of how I felt after reading this masterpiece. I could say awesome but that doesn't express my feelings quite as well as WoW. I would applaud but you cannot hear. So..... WoW, sir, Wow!

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* Sunprincess * 21 February 2016

..........a most lovely tribute ?

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Akhtar Jawad 21 February 2016

He created, gave his soul to us and slept in our hearts. Now it's our responsibility to do the rest. A beautiful poem FJR, after a long time I see a very good selection of members poem of the day. Congratulations are needed by undeserving selections but it's customary so I congratulate you.

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 22 February 2016

Funny thing is that with it's many structural faults, it had to be this one chosen for a P.O.D..when my name got pulled of the POD poetry pool...LoL...Grateful all the same, PH...Most of all, thanks to all who read, and mucho thanks to those who took the time to leave their cyber-mark...Again, much appreciated ~FjR~

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Saul Ranton 22 February 2016

Whoa! ! ! ! I'll go with susan and just say WOW, WOW, WOW, WOW! And Awesome too! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Kumarmani Mahakul 15 August 2019

Even trees need a stretch of a long winters rest and nature mother has preserved many things for us and for all trees. God is powerful light of Deity and he controls natural actions. We feel God by observing nature. An excellent and powerful poem is nicely penned...10

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Rajendra Rout 26 September 2017

i enjoy your poem.it was a very beautiful poem

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Rajendra Rout 26 September 2017

it was a very very very beautiful poem.thanks for shairing...10+++

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Rajendra Rout 26 September 2017

it was a very very very beautiful poem

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Rebecca Lyle 28 March 2017

What a beautiful poem, I agree he is everywhere. In nature, in the sky, in human creation. Lovely read.

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