Passing Time Comments

The poem sounds almost like a song, very well written I like the verses about the butterflies a lot. Good work!

Lovely writing, and a beautiful conclusion. Great poetry.

Lovely poem, read mine - I Cannot Return - Adeline

The right words, when stringed together, can bring forth a beautiful reality whether it truly exists in the real world or is just a figment of the imagination. This poem is a proof. You penned it nicely. Thank you for your compliment about me. I value it :)

Natures journey thru the seasons gently comes to life in the poem leaving a gentle feeling with the reader...nice...regards