Thursday, February 2, 2012

Passionately Confused Comments

Rating: 5.0

On an ancient stone we sketched dreams upon faded dreams
Sentiment rigid like a figure-eight knot
Zeal mystified and perception rectified on the rail you led
I stole an unclouded heart of a seraphic being and Lord knew I never felt guilty
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Dennis Mzwakhe Pitso
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Dave Walker 02 February 2012

Really like it. A great poem, a great write. May i invite you to read my new poem called, Evil Rising.

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