Passive Vision Poem by SALINI NAIR

Passive Vision

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Futile not abandoned
Enormously not construed
In a closed wall through a slit
It’s interpreted that
Just some leaves and a slit view of white
A dusk that almost happened
Spread some lament light
Back side full darkened
A window view that’s portrait
Leaves moves and visible some darkened sky
In a quest moved outside
It’s wide and infinite
Just a portion darkened
As rest a withdrawal of daylight
Persist and moved a bit
There visible a rising moon
Then arrived numerous stars
Went to sleep in that enormous thought
Preserve to hope and tract to next
In the dawn it’s delighted
Occupied the majesty and not evident with naked eye
Yet it lights the world and controls life
Mighty vision of nature and light
A corner vision that prolonged
A big mistake
Contracted vision produces some interpretations
That's vague, and prolonged

©2014 SALINI.S.NAIR. All rights reserved.

Monday, March 31, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: nature
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
a vision of sky in evening through small window.Full vision was not possible..its interpretations..then to an open world that give full view.........of life
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