SALINI NAIR

Gold Star - 7,637 Points (2/2/1981 / kottayam)

Unknowingly! - Poem by SALINI NAIR

There the randomness senses
Withdrawal of an unknown tact
Momentum was there in each turn
To the heights of an artistic part

Pensiveness grooms in senses
Holistic part looms and whispers
Breeze that tingle in heart with sigh
Abundance that wrestle and lapses

Sense the clout with a part of life
Unknown shores mark its part
Union of all lovely fancies
Hidden part contradicts itself

Visual was empty all these time
But the whistle narrate its chart
Feel that pamper inner sighs
Holiness that rejuvenate its part

Vagueness may be in next track
Some hands is rating that way silently
Blindness never unwrap its facts
As it beyond senses of human! ! ! ! ! !

©2015 SALINI.S.NAIR. All rights reserved.

Topic(s) of this poem: god


Poet's Notes about The Poem

We can sense a breeze though not visible..Like that there is some supreme power unknown…

Comments about Unknowingly! by SALINI NAIR

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (3/10/2015 2:26:00 PM)


    Deep feeling. Very nicely composed. Best word choice. Many thanks. (Report) Reply

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  • Kumarmani Mahakul (3/10/2015 2:25:00 PM)


    Deep feeling. Very nicely composed. Best word choice. Many thanks. (Report) Reply

  • Akhtar Jawad (3/10/2015 6:46:00 AM)


    Vagueness may be in next track
    Some hands is rating that way silently
    Blindness never unwrap its facts
    As it beyond senses of human! ! ! ! ! !
    A powerful poem.
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  • Mark Heathcote (3/7/2015 11:00:00 PM)


    Nice write enjoyed this read thanks for sharing it. (Report) Reply

  • Rajesh Thankappan (3/7/2015 10:20:00 AM)


    Blindness never unwrap its facts.

    Nice poem. We do not know how the Divine Hand works.
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  • Bhargabi Dei Mahakul (3/6/2015 4:52:00 AM)


    With the randomness of senses and withdrawal of unknown act still faith always fluctuates in mind of many. Although to realize God and his creation is beyond senses still God is only the truth. Beautiful as well as wonderful poem shared. (Report) Reply

  • Edward Kofi Louis (3/6/2015 4:31:00 AM)


    Nice piec eof work. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

    E.K.L.
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Poem Submitted: Friday, March 6, 2015



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