It’s so silent in and around
All thinks it’s not my way
My pave leads me to my family
I will be silent till it breaks
I will keep mum if someone killed
I will be silent if a girl molested
I will escape if some riot breakup
I will be murmur if corruption occurs
I will protect mine if nature reacts
I will vote and I will relax
I will work and I will earn
But I will entertain as I wish
I ‘am projected instead of us
I am in a circle of my’’ F’’
I need to live and I need to survive
Rest is not my concern
I is the base and I is the downfall
Where need to build a WE, to be in a paradise
Come out of the shell and be in a society
So that will learn the sense of society
Or one day I’ will stand alone
And that will perish,
At the point will end this society
Be a human to be a human being….
©2014 SALINI.S.NAIR. All rights reserved.
Love for being self-centric and futility of such an attitude have been brought out in an artistically subtle manner. Thanks
The poetess pinpoints the limitation of the individual in the society which have so much problems and evading habits of individuals in such circumstances which is the route cause of evils that are not questioned. It is a beautiful poem.
We are all obsessed with our own selves.....! We seek shelter in a glass chamber, when the world around us sobs and grieves! Others' problems are never our concern. Man should undergo a radical change in his lopsided attitude to life and learn to see those around us as our own brethren! A great message!
The I definitely spells EGO all around..............unconcerned and devastating..........rams the community-society! !
Nice piece of work. Thanks for sharing this poem with us. E.K.L.
A very good concept on which this piece is based....the truth has been spelt out....people are concerned primarily with their own interests, benefits, welfare, etc., regardless of others.....so let me quote what we need to do as let us understand what our own selfish genes are up to, because we may then at least have the chance to upset their designs. [Richard Dawkins
a good idea. nice poem and message. i liked it. 'be a human to be human being'
looking around us to see the other part of this world is critical working together is the key to success nice
I am in a circle of my’’ F’’ And 'F stands for: - Family, Friends, Foes, Fantasies, Frustrations, Fatigues, and above all the Faith.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
all live for ' I'...it projects always........instead do something for society