Rejoiced at every opportunity to hear you pray
Reassured at your prophetic declarations against tribulation fray
Waited at every opportunity to be in your presence any day
Most importantly waited for next Sunday
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Hi Patricia, yourn poetry is good and heartfelt.I hope your talent brings with it an outlet/inlet that will help bring brightness to you and others.
Very good work for a your first serious effort...I agree...you do hnave a newfound skill...And my condolences for your loss. I'm sure your Pastor is smiling right now with pride as people like me read this fine memorial/tribute you have penned for him. Now, don't lose that inspiration...Poetics is an ongoing learning experience as any of our modern day Poet's will confirm....The key is toread, read & read the Contemporary Poets, m oreso trhan our Classic olde-tyme Poet's....And practice, practice & practice some more...Good Luck, young lady ~FjR~
May their souls rest in peace. Very painful indeed