Paternoster Poem by Ivan Donn Carswell

Paternoster



they were not words I chose
but echoes ringing free of
circumstance; the wine gave
me an absolute and cast-iron
guarantee that I was not to
blame – as if I cared.

$30 retail wouldn’t seem the
cause by my acerbic happenstance
although enough I knew it wasn’t
sole and only origin to where
the paternoster true
anomalies were born

if you will give me words
I know I’ll pay your price
before you ever see the cause
of phrases jemmied from the
vault of what it was before
they made us nice...
© 2 December 2009, I. D. Carswell

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Alison Cassidy 31 December 2009

'...phrases jemmied from the vault of what it was before they made us nice'. Could this one be served at the powers behind the PoemHunter passion for the 'clean', I wonder? At first I thought you were speaking of the joke of absolution bought and paid for, but after reading your current biography, I figure your 'cause' might be more narrowly directed. Delighted to read you again, Ivan. It's been a long time. As usual, you share your unblenched rage with a sharp nib and skill to boot. Happy 2010.

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