Patience Poem by Harley Morriss

Patience

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i tried to go for it
but it was the mistake
but now i try not to rush
yet i think it to is wrong
can you tell me
when are ment to
as your birthday gift
never and just hide wats true?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Monkey Mendez 01 June 2008

For a title, perhaps 'patience' or 'the right time'? I like it :)

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J Baker 11 May 2008

Very well written. Well done.

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