Mandy MMR

Rookie (10/30/91 / Texas)

Peace - Poem by Mandy MMR

Life is an awakening
Life is something new
Life is something you've never dreamed
Come true

Hope is a sensation
Hope is something grand
Hope is something you've never known
To understand

Love is a pure feeling
Love is something plain
Love is something you think
To be insane

Comments about Peace by Mandy MMR

  • (4/30/2006 4:05:00 PM)

    that one waz really good 2..sry im really bad about writing comments i usually only know if i like it or not and i liked dat 1....the only thing is on the last line of life, hope, and love it kinda throws off the rythm a little bit like on life (on the last line) i would put 'could never come true', on hope (last line) 'you could ever understand', and on love (also last line) 'could only be insane, ' and thats the only thing i can think of for this 1 (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, April 21, 2006

Poem Edited: Saturday, July 17, 2010

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