Tuesday, May 3, 2016

Peace In Trade Comments

Rating: 5.0

I saw a picture of peace, in a simple kitchen scene, hair in dark ringlets a face of middle age, and eyes as deep as wells.

A humble home, a woman of peasant stock. A glance so dull, yet deep in cost, in this I saw peace in trade a life of cost, for this single scene.
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Mike Smith 03 May 2016

This is beautifully expressed for many reasons, but I'll address the one that strikes me most wholeheartedly. The briefness. Peace. Experienced entirely, but only for a moment. That seems to be the way of it. Peace, in my lifetime at least, had never been a lasting thing; but rather a fleeting feeling that we look back on and appreciate. Wonderful poem. Thanks Jason for sharing

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Jason Cain 06 May 2016

thank you for your encouraging comments Mike

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Ratnakar Mandlik 03 May 2016

Beautifully memorized meaningful and thought provoking impression nicely portrayed through this poem. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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Jason Cain 06 May 2016

Thank you Ratnakar you are both encouraging and appreciated.

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