Sunday, March 13, 2011

Peace Trespassed Comments

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The shadows encroach,
Upon my glade,
The only peace,
In my mind made,
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Kieran J1996
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Unwritten Soul 25 January 2013

You know how to write a poem very well, a very good one, you own it, i am glad you turning the old dark poem into new brighter collections now_Soul

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Søren Valentine 24 January 2013

I seriously love this poem. The shadows encroach, Upon my glade, this paints a picture in my mind I cannot even describe and the whole of the last stanza is amazing! I also really like the last line of the second stanza... it leaves a profound affect on me personally. Thanks for sharing! Keep writing, yea?

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