Tuesday, August 12, 2008

Pen Comments

Rating: 5.0

As I touch her once again
I felt how much she freezes inside
The coldness seems to destroy her,
Isolation took-off the light she once owned.
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Alnaver Baltazar
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Eyan Desir 30 June 2009

Strong write poet you keep your pen working

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Ency Bearis 12 August 2008

a good creative concepts....a wonderful illusionary verses...I like the creativity... Ency Bearis

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Alnaver Baltazar

Alnaver Baltazar

Manila, Philippines
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